My heart lays before me, returned on the platter i served it on.
Nothing hurts more like rejection from the one i thought i understood.
I’ve lost the strength,
To linger and lust at the sound of your name.
I am done trying to get back with you,
All attempts were futile.
I’ve lost the race,
When all I needed was confidence to win.
You left me broken,
But broken is where I found my strength.
I loved you selflessly,
I got nothing in return for that.
I am done being your fool,
You rejected me, left me to see the worst.
All I gave you was my love,
Was it not enough?
We’re just fragments of what we use to be,
We’re now like a dissipated memory.
We’re like echo’s of a nightmare,
I’ve been cursed to live with.
Though I navigate through tortuous waters and have weathered unbelievable storms.
I am still beyond repair.
Β© Xavier Frazer
Beautifully written… Please checkout my blog.
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Thanks you I definitely will
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Do tell me if you like it!
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Oh no. Please read my “broken toy” . No one is beyond repair. π
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Lol, I know that. But for some people being repair seems like a dream that never materialize.
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“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?” ~ P.B. Shelley. One of my favourite quotes from one of my favorite poets for the (un) broken you.
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Thank you for that ;). I think am OK now just most of my pieces are inspired by past experiences.
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I’m happy to hear that π
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And I am glad that you’re happy
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Spreading the joy, Xavier! π
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I appreciate that π π
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I can relate to feeling broken and heart ache. When the dust settles, I find the next time I see sooner the warning signs of whom to avoid.
β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ to you as you mend!
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Thank you Tiffany. I am already mend most of my poems are from personal experiences.
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Great write! Glad you’re doing better. Whew!
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π π
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We’ve all been there and felt exactly the same way as you, eloquently put and the pain shows through as a nightmare half remembered.
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True π
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Exquisitely conveyed, reflecting what many find hard to put into words! Can so relate and thank you for sharing your experiences, thankfully being past ones and remaining there!
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I humbled that you like it. It was my pleasure to share
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The power of writing, and sharing our writing is an amazing and therapeutic experience.
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Yeah it definitely is
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Great read!!!
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Thank you.
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This is heart-wrenching but beautiful. I loved it. Here’s hoping you’ll check out my blog as well. Best wishes. π
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I am humbled that you love it my friend, I will definitely check yours out
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It was a pleasure, friend. π
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Thank you
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Many thanks for visiting my blog and following.
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It was a pleasure
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Beautiful, You can feel the pain through the words. Rejection is tough but sometimes that’s what you need huh
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Yeah
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I love this one
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Seeing a comment from you warms my heart. I am truly humbled that you love this piece.
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Always loved your work, you are inspired π
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Such a beautiful, eloquent piece. Truly heartbreaking.
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Thank you, I am truly humbled
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So heartfelt. Touching. Beautiful.
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I am humbled by your comment
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